alright Viktor.. the gorgeous fellow with the like if you cri evertiem story. let’s get started now shall we. heres some info you should know before we start this off.
name: Viktor scythe
age: 3,897
species: half human/half demon
nationality: britain
gender:male (can be be a female)
sexuality: bisexual
hopes: i don't think he has any
fears: water, cheese bread (even though he loves it)
personality traits: lazy, headstrong, scatter-brained and mainly lazy
Backstory:((So I’m trying to do this from memory, please correct me in the places where I am wrong))
Viktor’s dad was a demon with a four dicks making him very rapey. Every night he would grab girls off the street and rape them in his rape liar until they dies of rape.
Yeah...in other terms...most of them died by getting penetrated by four dicks.
Or maybe it was four girls on four dicks.
I dunno.
However Viktor’s mum was a very special snowflake she apparently SURVIVES THIS ENTIRE ORDEAL (maybe was a prostitute and she had a very loose vagina so all his dicks could fit in her (I dunno if she liked it though)) so he keeps her in a cage or something until she gave birth to Viktor (Apparently Viktor’s demon dad’s pullout game weak)!!
rapey liar (caaaaan you feel the rapeey-nessss….)
And that’s the last thing we ever get to see of viktor’s mummy.
great.
And that’s all you need to know about his parents. Let’s get started on this most ugliest turd!
Viktor grew up in a very troubling household. He usually stayed in his room, playing with his toys, but underneath where his father stayed, Viktor could hear the screams and cries of anguished women. Viktor never really liked the sound, but he always had to live with it.
Viktor was also raped by his father as punishment….
At school he was constantly bullied for being a dumb loser. His only friend was this one girl. Her name was Raven (IDK her real name but...FORESHADOWING). Raven and Viktor got along quite nicely, until his father came into the situation. Viktor’s dad, for some reason, didn’t want Viktor to have any friends, so he raped Raven. Raven also MIRACULOUSLY SURVIVES…..but kills herself by jumping off a bridge.
And Viktor watched her jump off a bridge.
He cried.
Many years later Viktor ran away from his household, mooching off of girls he had sex with. Maybe he stayed with him once every week but IDK.
Because he had so much sex he developed ROCK HAERD ABS because sex burns a lot of calories and is a good exxxcercise!
Yah and then one day he stumbled across this mansion while drunk (the Dracx house). He asked to live with them and f**ked all of them (all of them meaning Aura and Ace..maybe Amber and Lucius IDK help me out) because they’re all succubi and he’s half demon. Also sometimes they use sex-enhancing drugs to do some craaazzzzzzy shit (no kidding)
THE END.
(also Viktor’s dad steals Blaze and Viktor loses his shit)
The entire thing is so cliched that I just gave up.
Basic bio:
There are so many conflicting personality traits. Get rid of the fact that he's headstrong or get rid of the trait of laziness. THERE'S NO IN-BETWEEN. Don't even get me started on the fears. HIS FEARS ARE ABSOLUTELY RIDICULOUS!! Also being a little nit picky; make some of the fears non-tangible. I absolutely hate it when people put in their bios that they're oc fears physical objects, and not mental or emotional fears. But I dunno, that's just me.
Character design:
Viktor’s design is very sexy, and not in a good way. He’s too sexy, and he looks like the type of people that if they wore rapey glasses they would look like a sexual predator.
He’s really chiseled to perfection, and looks so dark, edgy and disgusting it makes me cringe. But that is not all, oh no, we were just at the tip of the iceberg...
Backstory:
The backstory uses rape as a plot contrivance, which gets me all riled up because “oh yeah, Viktor’s likes rape so now he has a reason to kill his father”. That is utter bull! EVEN THE MOTHER IS BULL! HOW CAN ONE BE SUCH A SPECIAL SNOWFLAKE IF ALL THE OTHER GIRLS DIED OF RAPE IT MAKES NO SENSE THIS ENTIRE STORY MAKES NO SENSE OH MY GOSH---
But what if this entire story was just a joke.
what if the author thought “Hey, maybe I should make a joke oc that’s really edgy and it’ll be so funny”
Well, it’s not funny.
because Rape isn’t funny.
overall score: 1/10
JUDGEMENT: SEXY DEMONIC SONNIKU
(just a lot more worse)
(just a lot more worse)
